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Time and Tide

Post AWE. "She looks up at the stars and remembers another night on a beach miles and months from here. Finds Aquila following Cygnus. Cassiopeia on her throne where down is definitely not up. S...

Category: Pirates of the Caribbean - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy - Characters: Elizabeth, Jack - Warnings: [!!!] [?] - Published: 2007/06/03 - Updated: 2007/06/04 - 1727 words - Complete

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• Time and Tide

  (#) Ithilwen 2007-06-04 06:11:34 PM

  "the resonate heartbeat." Resonant? Resonating?
  
  "Longboat" is one word.
  
  "That compass of his presses into her hip; it has remained unopened for months." Hm... a double meaning perhaps? And the flash of green in Jack's eyes.
  
  I'm not sure exactly what's happening near the end -- is Jack standing there with her when she's waiting to meet Will? A reread suggests it's only the boy. -- but it's been a reflective ride.

  Author's response

  Jack is standing there with her - at least, that was my intention.
  
  Looking at it again I suppose you could see him as being in her thoughts rather than a physical presence.

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