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YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!
(#) littlestar451 2007-06-05
It's really good :-) I like the format alot. I'm going to pass on a little constructive crit. that I got when I first started writing :-) Separate the paragraphs with spaces:
blah,blah,blah
blah,blah,blah
Like that, it makes it easier to read and sometimes it makes it look longer :-) I luv the story and keep up the good work!YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!
(#) clutsy_93 2007-06-07
oh my god
this is awesome, I think i'm going to like this story alot, ahaha i already love it :) please update soon, i'm tempted to find out what happens next and yessss....YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!
(#) MEthePHANTOM 2007-06-21
its so gross that her 8 year old has a boyfriend, sickoAuthor's response
it's not sick it's a boy her age it's kiddie stuff!
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