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on tour

2 weeks later they finish packing there stuff and now they are on tour

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/06/05 - Updated: 2007/06/06 - 456 words

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• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) rockisforever 2007-06-05 06:18:47 PM

  your a really good writer. keep going this story is really good.

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) rockisforever 2007-06-05 06:20:21 PM

  your a really good writer. keep going this story is really good.Im turning 13 and im in a starting rock band so i can relate a little to the girl but the only sibling i have in the band is my brother thts the drummer and hes older then me.

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) littlestar451 2007-06-05 06:48:26 PM

  It's really good :-) I like the format alot. I'm going to pass on a little constructive crit. that I got when I first started writing :-) Separate the paragraphs with spaces:
  
  blah,blah,blah
  
  blah,blah,blah
  
  Like that, it makes it easier to read and sometimes it makes it look longer :-) I luv the story and keep up the good work!

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) clutsy_93 2007-06-07 06:21:03 AM

  oh my god
  this is awesome, I think i'm going to like this story alot, ahaha i already love it :) please update soon, i'm tempted to find out what happens next and yessss....

• YOU make me feel so good when your inside me!

  (#) MEthePHANTOM 2007-06-21 02:40:31 PM

  its so gross that her 8 year old has a boyfriend, sicko

  Author's response

  it's not sick it's a boy her age it's kiddie stuff!

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