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Yule Truths

The Final Battle is over. Harry has left Britain, leaving a devastated magical community, a lost Hermione, and a blinded Luna. Hermione becomes Professor McGonagall's apprentice while she cares f...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Harry, Hermione, Luna, Professor McGonagall, Snape - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2007/06/16 - Updated: 2007/06/16 - 3416 words

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  (#) Cateagle 2007-06-16 09:29:02 AM

  Well, that's a good end for Severus; he may even come to a better understanding of himself. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised at McGonagall knowing, somehow she doesn't strike me as one this Harry would care to hide something from.
  
  I thought the final scene was well-done. 'Twas an amusing way to tell Hermione the truth; now we get the full story and we see whether or not they can remain as intimate, or moreso, as they've become. I did love Luna's comments there, I wonder how she knew.

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  (#) Destroyerdrt 2007-06-16 09:44:26 AM

  Saw hat comeing when I read the frist chapter.Thank you and please ignore any and all flames.Have fun and keep up the great work that you have done.

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  (#) NAPPA 2007-06-16 10:43:38 AM

  ROFL - Were you quoting Babylon 5 at the beginning of the chapter ?
  
  I am so glad that the Brother Z thing is now solved. I have to say, the deaths were all very unique. If nothing else, they were brilliant in this fic :)
  
  NAPPA

  Author's response

  Yep. My favorite show of the 1990s.
  
  "T"

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  (#) Jiltanith 2007-06-16 11:26:40 AM

  I'm with Luna, I want to know about the time travel! I can hardly wait for the next part!

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-06-16 11:28:15 AM

  Woohoo! I can't wait until the next chapter...explanations aplenty, it would seem. I like the maturity that Snape showed. It's rare to have literally EVERY flaw of his pointed out to him, and even rarer for him to listen.

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2007-06-16 01:26:26 PM

  What an awesome chapter. I so look forward to the next one. I loved that Luna knew and the fainting was so her. I look forward to their discussion and love making... hint hint

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  (#) BJH 2007-06-17 07:03:19 AM

  And the truth comes out.
  
  I was hoping for something a bit more dramatic with Snape though. I assume you aren't done with him yet though since we still have the rest of the school year to go.
  
  BJH

  Author's response

  Does anyone really think snape can leave well-enough alone?
  
  "T"

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  (#) Shaggy37 2007-06-17 08:36:28 PM

  Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) Shaggy37 2007-06-17 08:37:19 PM

  Outstanding chapter!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) twilliams1797 2007-06-17 08:53:29 PM

  I KNEW IT!!! thank you!!!
  please continue!!!!THANK YOU!!!!

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