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The Root Of His Problems

(This possibly may become my most controversial story in the history of moocow. This takes place in the darkest part of my mind, the place where all those thoughts I know I shouldn't think come fro...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2007/06/17 - Updated: 2007/06/17 - 1392 words

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  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-06-17 12:34:47 AM

  Awesome beginning. I can't wait for more.

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  (#) theblondeone0828 2007-06-17 01:18:22 AM

  I'm speechless.
  And so stoked for this story.
  You're amazing.

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  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-06-17 10:08:31 AM

  holy shit, ev. you never cease to amaze me, and thats a fact. this is... well, amazing. it also kinda got me in a depressed mood and i'm about to go to work, you meanie. but still. you did a very nice job predicting what is going to happen in the next year, although i really hope it doesnt end up like that. i think that if he does marry ashlee, they probably will lose a lot of the die hards and ones that are actually ture fans, although they'll probably gain more of the people who are meant to be fans for the likes of Ashlee Simpson, and they probably won't have another guy at their shows lol. but enough with my predictions. you did an honest to god AWESOME job with this, and i didnt think it was possible for you to impress me more, but you did. you proved that you are a writer, a damn good one at that. and i'm gonna stop ranting now cause this review is way to serious for a girl like me who usually just offers a chocolate chip cookie or a hug :P hehe nice job, and i seriously cant wait to see what you do with this one.

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  (#) amanda. (signing in is pretty pointless, you know me.) 2007-06-17 11:24:38 AM

  so, this stories pretty much AMAZING.
  i really, really love it. i'd say it's on the top five storie list in my head, but i'm pretty sure three others on that list are also moocow creations.

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  (#) fobgal1 2007-06-17 02:00:55 PM

  Love it so far.
  I can't wait for more.
  You always amaze me with your writing.
  Please update soon.

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  (#) ???? 2007-06-17 02:10:41 PM

  you are a good writer but i dont like this story. its too upsetting and depressing

  Author's response

  Thank you and I'm sorry that you don't like it. But I even put a warning in the summary that says that this is a tragety. And plus, it's fiction. I'm sorry that you feel too upset and depressed while reading it, but I'm pretty sure this wouldn't happen in real life. But please, if you will just bear with me; this was only the prologue and the story hasn't even started yet. I'm not saying it's going to be all bubbley smiles like some of my past stories, but I've worked really hard on this so it's sad to hear that you aren't reading it because it's "Too upsetting and depressing". But If you don't like it, don't read it. And maybe pay attention to warning labels. I am only a writer of fiction.

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  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-06-17 03:10:40 PM

  and whoever that person was that doesnt like this story can just suck it, ya think? i think the point of the story IS to be upsetting and depressing, setting the mood. this is good evie. and dont let anyone tell u any different. :] ok maybe i'm feeling too protective of you. hehe sorry i just really love this.

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  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-06-17 08:26:42 PM

  this is Casie's mom. I thought the story was slow in the beginning, but the last part was interesting. I am not much of a Fall Out Boy fan, so I assume that Hemmingway was his dog. I like sci-fi stories, so this is not what I am really interested in. Over all it was good. Keep writing and express your ideas and interest in your writing. -Leelie
  
  Casie: oh my god. i cant believe my mom just read your story. hahahaha that is hilarious. she especially liked the part about pete's peter :] hehe. i still cant believe that... yeah my mommy is a huuuugggeee christian who disaproves of "thnks fr th mmrs" because it says "in case god doesn't show.." soo you know this isnt really her kinda stuff. she's like so this is the kind of stuff you write?! and i'm like. uhhh yeah? and she's like oh. ok this review is freakin long cause its two ppl sooo i'm outta here. peacee

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  (#) tina 2007-06-17 08:49:41 PM

  one of the best things u've writen. and i think all of ur stories are great as hell.
  
  but dam this was deep, i loved it, it brought tears in my eyes.
  
  please continue this fasst!
  
  ah.
  
  did i metion i love this story?
  
  well i do.
  
  i love it. =D

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  (#) jessa 2007-06-18 05:11:46 PM

  I like your stories, but for some reason throughout every piece you've written, you make convey 'smirking' like it's an audible thing. Like it's the same thing as laughing or something. You can't smirk over the phone with the person on the other end being able to hear you. Besides that, 'sall good.

  Author's response

  Thank you for liking my stories. I have to tell you that "smirking" is audiable. It's not quite a laugh and not a giggle either. More like a sarcastic, short laugh. Much like the one I made when I read this. But everyone is entitled to thier own opinions.

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