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Time to Say Goodbye
4 reviewsShe's dead. He must be taking this hard. I looked up and saw him standing in the muddy driveway, rain pouring down.
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Don't Waste your Time on Me
(#) iJonasBros 2007-06-20
Super deep. This probably has some deep meanings that will fly over my Hollister & Jonas Brothers filled head, so call me and explain kk? But, you are a totally rad writer, keep writing! xDAuthor's response
Over your head? Doubt it. But hey, I can explain. As long as I don't get yelled at by your mom for long distance charges again. She woke me up!Don't Waste your Time on Me
(#) Panda 2007-06-20
That was sad but amazing. please update as soon as possible.
You a truly amazing writer.
Peace
CynaraAuthor's response
Thanks :) I tried to make it sad.
Take a different story approach.
Not all that chating love triangle jazz I did in "My Smile..."Don't Waste your Time on Me
(#) clutsy_93 2007-06-23
that was amazing and sad :(
but I like it, good startAuthor's response
Thanks. It's my first MCR and I wasn;t sure if I was capturing anyone's attention.Don't Waste your Time on Me
(#) darkviolet 2007-06-23
i loved it so much!! mainly because it felt so real!! i was seriously feeling her pain! the only thing that would be nice is if you break it into paragraphs, there was one really long part there and it would be much easier to erite if you'd break it to a few paragraphs. other than that, awasomw story!!! i think gerard is going to hhok up with her! am i right?????Author's response
Totally. Anything to make it easier for people to read. I am flattered that you like it. And as for whether or not you're right, I cannot say. Wouldn't that give some of the plot away? Can;t do that.
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