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Chapter One: The Art of Duelling
16 ReviewsHarry finds an old parchment that instructs him in how to properly use his...wand.
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(#) BlackAngel 2007-05-24 03:48:35 PM
That was really funny. You up for a sequal? -
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(#) BlackAngel 2007-05-24 03:50:59 PM
Really sweet and funny about fell out of my chair. You up for a sequal? He could of course go through a lot girls at hogwarts till someone explaned it to him! :)Author's response
Currently I have no plans for a sequel, but if I ever get inspiration, I will write one. About different girls, I don't know. Ginny was easy to write into this sort of fic, but other girls are much more challenging. Although I might be able to do Luna and/or Hermione. Thanks for reading! -
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(#) HakuRules1424 2007-05-24 04:26:10 PM
That was really good and funny but it has major OOC (out of charactor) because harry's a guy and when reading that and seeing her face no guy could be that stupid and not unsderstand what it meant ha ha CyaAuthor's response
Well... Of course Harry is not really that naive, but I don't think he was too OOC. Especially because this is a humor fic. Anyway, thanks for reading! -
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(#) happyreader 2007-05-24 04:59:17 PM
good fun,,,, can you keep it up,,,mmmm haha -
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(#) happyreader 2007-05-24 05:00:17 PM
good fun,,,, can you keep it up,,, for a few chapters or is this a one shot? mmmm hahaAuthor's response
Currently this is an one-shot, but that may change. Thanks for reading! -
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(#) DavidMPotter 2007-05-24 07:00:03 PM
What a briliant chapter. I can't wait until she demands to service his wand.Author's response
Hmm... I might even use that line... 'Service' is such a nice word with multiple meanings. Thanks for reading! -
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(#) Cateagle 2007-05-24 07:44:22 PM
snickerguffaw Oh, that's priceless!! Harry's so wrapped up in the dueling side of things he's not catching all the innuendo that's driving Ginny wild. I daresay he's about to have quite the learning experience from more than one king of "duel".Author's response
Oh yes... Harry is about to get some 'hands on' learning. Lucky him. Thanks for reading! -
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(#) BenRG 2007-05-25 01:58:17 AM
Bravo! A finer piece of double-entendre I have yet to see on this site. Your characterisation of Ginny was wonderful; I could actually see and hear it in my head. :D Your use of painfully naieve!Harry was also hillariously judged.
I just wonder what will happen in that empty classroom, given that Harry and Ginny clearly have very distinct ideas about what they have just been discussing.
BenRG's Rating: 9/10Author's response
Thanks! I tried my best to keep Ginny in character as Harry was obviously slightly OOC, and it's good to see my efforts are appreciated. About the classroom... Well, I think I will leave it to readers' imagination. -
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(#) Nautilus 2007-05-25 06:00:41 AM
awesome, congrats... oh... what about hermione... maybe harry can practice with multiple partners...Author's response
Thanks! If I make this to a chaptered story, Harry might very well 'duel' with Hermione... -
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(#) Kath 2007-05-25 07:44:26 AM
LOL it's hillarious !! Pity that it is a one-shot... you should REALLY continue it.. like harry saying "Ginny, do you think that I should take off my shirt? It would make my movements easier during the duel, don't you think?" liked the idea?
Cheers*Author's response
After which Ginny would promptly tell Harry that 'duels' are traditionally 'fought' naked. This piece of information would confuse Harry, but after pondering it for a moment he would decide that it makes sense. After all, clothes do impede movement. Besides, what is he to fight against old traditions... Thanks for reading!