(#) glindapsawyer 2007-07-14 04:25:37 PMaw, just all of it, aw. shithead jeremy is so great, as are charlie and patrick's little quips back at him. again i absolutely adore patrick and jocelyn's relationship, basically because he's so plainly expressed he's ready to be a dad (in real life) and i think he'd be the cutest dad. have you seen those pics of him holding who i think is dirty's baby. too adorable.
poor joce, she's only four, kids make mistakes. dumb teenager has to be all angsty and make a scene. geez!
i shant forget you. haha. i love this story too much. in fact i just got a buzznet, and i dont think i added you yet, but i will. :D
Author's responseOh Miss Leah, your reviews make me giddy. I have seen the pics of Dirty's spawn and Patrick. Adorable. It just wouldn't be a chapter without a Jeremy temper tantrum. He'll get a little worse before he gets better. Oh and you'd better add me, biotch!!!
- You write each character so well it is terrifyingly wonderful. I laughed outloud at Patrick's inner thoughts. He is quite a humorous man...he should talk more. And the best line was the fact that Patrick was dating Satan's mother. I usually refer to the kids I work with as Satan, so I felt it very fitting!
Smooches to a wonderful writer!!!
Author's responseCeCe? Is that you? I'd love to see an update on your end, love....nooooo pressure, though.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-07-16 07:09:47 AMTeachers suck, what do they know? hug
Loved the chappie, especially how Joyce is the smartest of them all.
Author's responseIt's not that my teacher was mean or said I sucked. It was quite the opposite and it freaked me out. But I'm back on track! Wait....aren't YOU a teacher?