- I like it, but completed? This could be so fleshed out into a big epic. Especially if you go back to the end of the original cartoon series...you could make Harry and his friends into Headmasters (humans serving as heads/controllers for robots). I'd love to see you do more with this concept.
- Harry as the Allspark? Well, that will make the Death Eaters lives interesting... and short. Just imagine Harry turning up to the party at the end of Half-Blood Prince with about thirty full-grown Transformers, armed to the teeth with magical energy and missile weapons. :-D
I also can see Hermione complaining that this is impossible, even after Harry has turned her radio/alarm clock into a bodyguard for her.
You might want to expand this story - write the full tale of how the presence of the Transformers affect the seven adventures of Harry Potter. Would Starscream contact Voldemort and suggest an alliance against a common foe? Would Dumbledore be willing to trade Harry to the Autobots in exchange for their firepower against Voldemort? Many different possibilities.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
- That was cute. I've never heard of 'the all spark' but then, I've never been a 'Transformers!' fan. You took an interesting idea and used it well. It could have been longer, and incorporated more of Harry's schooling, but you wrote it, not I.
Well done! Alorkin
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