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I Never Saw It Coming

He was never on time. Or maybe he was a little too early. {Short story}

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/08/27 - Updated: 2007/08/28 - 1250 words - Complete

Reviews

• I Never Saw It Coming

  (#) i_heart_cliches 2007-08-28 04:44:20 AM

  wow. That was really good. I liked how you put a lot of details in to her surroundings. It made me feel like I was actually waiting on the door step with her. I really loved the ending where his clock is an hour ahead... It was awesome! You're a good writer :)

  Author's response

  thank you very much!
  I tried my best to describe certain parts more then others =)
  And really glad you liked the ending.
  

• I Never Saw It Coming

  (#) StripesCO 2007-09-02 02:08:44 PM

  Oh God! Where do I begin? That was probably 1 of the best angst/drama P!ATD I have ever read! Jesus... that was soooo good. The detail and everything - perfectly balanced in it. Great job.

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