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I Never Saw It Coming
3 reviewsHe was never on time. Or maybe he was a little too early. {Short story}
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I Never Saw It Coming
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-08-28
wow. That was really good. I liked how you put a lot of details in to her surroundings. It made me feel like I was actually waiting on the door step with her. I really loved the ending where his clock is an hour ahead... It was awesome! You're a good writer :)Author's response
thank you very much!
I tried my best to describe certain parts more then others =)
And really glad you liked the ending.
I Never Saw It Coming
(#) StripesCO 2007-09-02
Oh God! Where do I begin? That was probably 1 of the best angst/drama P!ATD I have ever read! Jesus... that was soooo good. The detail and everything - perfectly balanced in it. Great job.
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