Categories > Games > Halo > a spartans quest

emotional catchup

by das867 1 Reviews

master chief finds a cold resolve to fight the covnant.

Category: Halo - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Sci-fi - Characters:  - Published: 2007/09/17 - Updated: 2007/09/17 - 414 words


  • a spartans quest

    (#) Matt_sbd 2010-05-12 04:28:39 PM

    I can see what you were trying to accomplish with both of your stories, but they are just a mess. The punctuation and Spelling in these stories really need some work, and there were some elements that seemed out of place in the Halo Universe.

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