a spartans quest: emotional catchup :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

master chief finds a cold resolve to fight the covnant.

Category: Halo - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Sci-fi - Characters: - Published: 2007/09/17 - Updated: 2007/09/17 - 414 words

a spartans quest

(#) Matt_sbd 2010-05-12 04:28:39 PM

I can see what you were trying to accomplish with both of your stories, but they are just a mess. The punctuation and Spelling in these stories really need some work, and there were some elements that seemed out of place in the Halo Universe.

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