(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-06-06I can't wait to see what you've got in store. I only hope it involves every single character that's not Harry, Snape, Petunia or Dudley being hit repeatedly by the Cruciatus Curse. I'm moving on to the sequel now, but I'd feel like an ass if I didn't review this one first.
Fantastic job...don't let those bastards get off too easily. I don't know how Dumbledore thinks Neville is "marked as his equal"...senile old bastard...
- intriguing story so far! I eagerly anticipate reading the sequel. I like that the characters are all flawed in some way, and quite human. I do hope you keep at least Harry straight. I don't mind some slash in supporting stories, but for some reason Harry/slash always seems to squick me. Dunno why. I don't know why I am even asking that, but something about how you wrote one of the scenes with Draco suggested growing attraction as more-than friends... Anyway, hope I haven't offended you.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.
(#) glrasshopper 2009-01-03This is a fantastic story. I've read a few where Harry has a disability of some type, but they are all... I don't know, maybe too made-up. From what experience I've had with disabled people, this just feels right.
Keep it up. I have to admit that I'm really looking forward to whether you do a Goblet rewrite as well. I think It'd be a fun read to see how he deal with a Veela nearby. Also to see what your take is on whether Dumbledore would try to stack the competition in Neville's favour.
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