oooooo its a nu guy, hu is it??? miikkeeey?????
i like it
yeh tis v gd
Author's responsenew guy...no, Joanna's the new girl...
Well I can't tell you can I. Sheesh woman.
So you like her better than leah?
(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-09-30haha, niiice
i like this, very original
but i think you shouldn't change up between first and third person quite so much. try doing it all in first, it seems suiting to the story
ok, I'll give it a go. Let it never be said don't listen to you guys.
Although I may do two versions of chapter three. One all in first and one in first and third. :]
- I like it! I agree with 'tragic' that it is original, but also wanted to say that if you like, you should keep switching perspectives, you just might want to make sure you're specifying that you are doing, and whose point of view it's in. Otherwise, first person would be good. You write well.
Author's responseOkay, I'll bear that in mind with the pov's. Thanks for saying it's orginal and thanks for saying I write well.
amazing chapter, but her so called
friend ditched her!
lol, update soon and oh my god,
is that guy she bumped into Mikey?
lol update soon :)
Author's responseYeah, friends, they're funny liek that. Always thinking you're ok when you're not.
(And to the person I write letters to I know that you know how I'm feeling!)
It could be Mikey. Could also be several other guys. Like Sam. And Phillip.
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