- Now that was a most interesting chapter. I like your characterization of Tracey and I think she's going to be very good for Harry. The will reading was a delight (I do wonder if Dumbles tried to barge in and was ejected) and it's interesting to note who had the strongest objections to not completely knowing what was going on with Harry (it makes you wonder if they're telling someone). I thought the final scene, when Tracey and Harry meet was quite nicely done and her reaction was quite in keeping. It will be interesting to see if Harry can convince her that he's more than "Gryffindor Golden Boy" conveys, or at least that there's more to that than she knows.
Great story and I'm most eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
- Well, after only reading the 1st chapter I was a bit skeptical, I thought this would be another one of those over-powered, Harry learns the key to all magic in an afternoon and then some, type of story. But after this chapter I see there is more depth than I originally thought, I am glad I decided to read this chapter. I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to Tracey's greeting. Hope to see more soon.
(#) jabarber69 2007-10-05oooh good update! you got me to where I cant wait to see the further conversation after that there annoucement! Hey great ideal for sirius portrait that will help him and remus alot! and also the bachelor party, have tonks do the dance! just kidding but still interesting ideal!
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