- Ohh, just this portion so far is right delight. I love the way the two of them are playing into their preconceived notions and then finding them slowly eroded away by the reality of the other as they get to know them. Bravo!!
Now, there was one slight typo, "... a shit that ..." should really be, from context, "... a shirt that ...". Mind you, it's an amusing typo, but still ...
Author's responselaughs Sorry about that. Been working beta free through out this story. I go over it several times but being that its all still in my head a day or two later I'm not really seeing the errors.
- Not a problem, but I understand how it happens and it's one reason I always have someone read my (non-HP) stuff over.
I reckon it's going to get -real- interesting once they get past their predjudices and see each other as persons insteead of preconceived notions. Then I'm sure the "fun" will start as they start dealing with their friends and the situations developing elsewhere.
Author's responseSmirks Evilly Stay tuned for the orders response and Lupins arrival. Oh and Harry's ally at Gringotts makes an appearance.
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