by Clell65619
5 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: - Characters: -
Warnings: [V] [X] [R] - Published: 2007/10/21 - Updated: 2007/10/21 - 3568 words - Complete
Reviews
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(#) Cateagle 2007-10-21 09:49:47 PM
chuckle The expanded version of chapter 4 is owrth it, just for Luna's explanations. I loved how Harry moved to meet the immediate problem he could handle and I especially loved Luna's comment about Hermione lacking imagination (I'd rather call it over reliance on the ceracity of authors, myself, but I digress). The reuniting of Hermione with her parents was very skillfully done by Luna and friends and it'll be interesting to see just how the decisions develop. Personally, I hope the decisions go in such a way as to maximize Luna's happiness as much as that of Harry & Hermione.
Author's response
Hopefully it works out for her, my outline has it doing so... but the damned actors start adlibing and the story stops paying attention to me...
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(#) DrT 2007-10-22 04:57:21 AM
Yea! I'm glad the full chapter has appeared.
"T"
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(#) Rocky235 2007-11-03 09:48:43 PM
Gees, my last review is evidence that I'm too tired and should go to bed.
I like your Luna and the scene with the Grangers was good.
(If anyone asks, the Dr T I spoke with is short, blond, and from South America.)
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(#) guamja 2008-04-22 04:24:16 PM
I also like your luna....can't wait to see what happens next...
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Outstanding, I sooo love Luna.
gunny