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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Cateagle 2007-10-21
chuckle The expanded version of chapter 4 is owrth it, just for Luna's explanations. I loved how Harry moved to meet the immediate problem he could handle and I especially loved Luna's comment about Hermione lacking imagination (I'd rather call it over reliance on the ceracity of authors, myself, but I digress). The reuniting of Hermione with her parents was very skillfully done by Luna and friends and it'll be interesting to see just how the decisions develop. Personally, I hope the decisions go in such a way as to maximize Luna's happiness as much as that of Harry & Hermione.Author's response
Hopefully it works out for her, my outline has it doing so... but the damned actors start adlibing and the story stops paying attention to me...The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Rocky235 2007-11-03
Gees, my last review is evidence that I'm too tired and should go to bed.
I like your Luna and the scene with the Grangers was good.
(If anyone asks, the Dr T I spoke with is short, blond, and from South America.)The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) guamja 2008-04-22
I also like your luna....can't wait to see what happens next...
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