Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > you can keep my brother

She dared me!

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

Brother, I'm not much a poet, but a criminal And your jacket never had a chance Love it, or leave it, you can't understand. A pretty face, but you do so carry on..

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/10/30 - Updated: 2007/10/30 - 1903 words - Complete

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  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-10-30 12:26:00 PM

    ugh. Liz.
    I guess every story needs an evil bitch arch rival chick and thats Liz...

    At least Sky realizes that shes trying to set her up...
    And I love how you put that bit about his old leather jacket! I loved that jacket...
    And that whole him carrying her off scene! I loved that! It was very cute. Like couple-y cute. They hardly have scenes like that. Like sweet scenes where theyre like touching! I know I said something like that before about like Sky not being all touchy feely but thats what this scene felt like... And it felt so comfortable too.
    Like you couldve easily made this jacket thing escalate into like a major fight with crying and name calling but you kept it light hearted and I liked it..
    Its another layer of their relationship that we havent really seen yet. I mean weve seen sky being silly with the other guys but not just her and G...
    With her and G it seems more personal you know? more... intimate...
    I really liked it.

    Author's response

    aw you really summarized what i feel for this chapter and what i wanted to convey so i'm pleased that i managed to pass what i wanted in this.
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-01 02:20:25 AM

    I love this story more every time I read it, the relationship between Sky and Gerard is so believable and you write so well. Your story is addictive!
    Sorry I haven't reviewed lately, but my computer died and had to be fixed, but I just read all the updates through and they are all fantastic, please keep writing this, it is my favourite story on here!

    Author's response

    aww it's so nice to hear all that positive feedback! so thank you very much and hopefully your computer wouldn't die anymore.

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