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Harsh Truths

by FrustratedPhoenix 8 Reviews

While tending Kouga's wounds, Kagome discovers the brutal reality about InuYasha's feelings.

Category: Inuyasha - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Inuyasha, Kagome, Koga - Published: 2006/01/10 - Updated: 2006/01/11 - 1146 words - Complete

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  • Harsh Truths

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-01-15 10:52:12 AM

    Hm... I don't see Kagome abandoning her responsibilities, even if she could be made to give up on Inuyasha. She was the one who broke the jewel in the first place, and she wouldn't forget that.



    Author\'s Response: Normally, I try to keep my fanfics as true to teh characters as possible, but this how it turned out. On other sites, I did place an ooc warning but must have forgot to on this one. Originally, this was supposed to be a comedy, but it ended up being dramatic and full of anger. It is ooc, but this still remains one of my favorites. Thanks for reviewing.
  • Harsh Truths

    (#) InuKag 2006-05-17 04:02:27 PM

    Inuyasha strikes me to be very irritated and full of hatred... its OOC becuase he really isnt that heartless.. plus kagome isnt attracted to koga that much... she has so many responsibilities to her future and gathering the shards she wouldnt just up and say fuck you im staying with koga... look for the rest of the shards urself. it just isnt really very like her... but its a good idea, you dont see many stories like this i suppose... everyone wants different pairings. Very angsty. (thats a good thing)
  • Harsh Truths

    (#) litlest_amazon 2007-01-21 01:17:24 AM

    I'm all for alternative pairings and such. Heck! I like sess/kag. BUT the alternative pairings I appreciate find a way around character assasination. With real reasoning behind the divergence from cannon. I also celebrate them because they forewarn readers of the impeding switch. Twists = good Accidentally reading Character assasination = bad. It's almost as bad as making Sir Integra a man (she's not). Most of the story (animated) is filler where Inu is confused and torn between the two mikos. Play it up. Don't just drop the bomb. You realized Inu wouldn't just come out and say it so you had kouga anger him until he had no control to say it. Could happen but as it lays it doesn't feel plausible. Best of luck
  • Harsh Truths

    (#) litlest_amazon 2007-01-21 01:24:43 AM

    I'm all for alternative pairings and such. Heck! I like sess/kag. BUT the alternative pairings I appreciate find a way around character assasination. With real reasoning behind the divergence from cannon. I also celebrate them because they forewarn readers of the impeding switch. Twists = good Accidentally reading Character assasination = bad. It's almost as bad as making Sir Integra a man (she's not). Most of the story (animated) is filler where Inu is confused and torn between the two mikos. Play it up. Don't just drop the bomb. You realized Inu wouldn't just come out and say it so you had kouga anger him until he had no control to say it. Could happen but as it lays it doesn't feel plausible. Best of luck

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