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Sunset

A very short story about Shinya comforting Die. This is my first try-what do you think?

Category: Dir en grey - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: Die,Shinya - Published: 2007/11/08 - Updated: 2007/11/22 - 407 words - Complete

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• Sunset

  (#) SupremeBaka 2007-12-01 09:43:56 PM

  ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!!!
  
  
  I LOVE IT!!!
  
  AMAZING!!!!!!!!
  
  I LOVE YOU
  
  U R AMAZING!!!
  
  BUT NOT AS AMAZING AS GERARD!!!!! SRRY!!!

• Sunset

  (#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20 07:46:30 PM

  This was really really cute! ^-^ Good job. I love their interactions together, such a lovely pairing.
  
  A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.
  
  Again though, I really liked it!

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'll do the spaces. :)

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