A very short story about Shinya comforting Die. This is my first try-what do you think?
(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-02-20 07:46:30 PMThis was really really cute! ^-^ Good job. I love their interactions together, such a lovely pairing.
A little friendly constructive criticism for you: to make it easier to read, try spacing out your paragraphs so it's not one big string of words.
Again though, I really liked it!
Author's responseThank you! I'll do the spaces. :)