cruddy fudgers. this is not good.
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-11-10 01:15:47 AMawww, hem/soapy love. i'm a dog person so that's in no way intended to be dirty. a squeaky toy is a perfectly nice present.
good chapter. i like the multiple points of view per chapter. thats one thing that definitely separates this story from others. and you've got me on the edge of my seat about the new love interest.
no pete/no pete/no pete :D
totally kidding, only not at all.
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-11-10 08:02:52 AMAwh that's sad that no one remembered :[
Hemingway to the rescue once again!
I like how you switch from the point of view of one person, to that of another.
It's pretty cool to be able to really see how everyone feels about what's going on.
And I can't wait to find out about the new love interest.
Update soon or I will be forced to eat this computer. :D
- ::sniffles:: That's HORRIBLE! I can't believe her friends foorgot that it was her birthday!
::grumbles about evilness of the random people around her:: Unless... Tey were actually planning a surprise part on the Cobra bus! ::gets all happyful again::
By the waaaaaaaaay... I was the one reviewing Viva La Cobra. I don't blame you, I find it really hard to keep reviews straight.
Once again you've made me happy. After a long day of college visits, it's awesome to be able to sit around and read awesome stories.
(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-11-10 05:06:41 PMawwwww
yeh i was thinking about the 16 candles coincidence too:P
i cnat believe they forgot her birthday = SOO HARSH
but then ide be so depressed -
maybe her nu love interest will help her out of it?
hint hint - tell us :P
- awwwwwww. omg.
NOT cool. dumbass pete & dirty!
lol. onlynotreally because this chapter wasn't funny..
that was sad.
i would hold a grudge against them for a LOOOOOONG time.
hopefully something good happens sooooon...
wutevs. soap+charlie ftmfw!!!
- Um I'm a new reader and particularly love this - I read it all in one sitting...more or less. Anyway I laughed so hard! apparently you like to make other people laugh... :D I have no clue what to say I think I got hairdye in my eyes... :D