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Girls vs. boys.

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

Invisible friend of the band.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/11/11 - Updated: 2007/11/11 - 1860 words - Complete

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  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-11-11 04:36:36 PM

    This was sad.
    Like really sad.
    I know it wasnt like a sad scene,nothing bad happened but it was overall just sad to watch. You could really feel Skys pain at being excluded but on the flip side shes afraid to speak up cause it would make her look I dunno patethic? whiney? that like she wants to be included... Its a hard emotion and you portrayed it really well. Sometimes its hard to ask people for what we want cause its like that little voice thats like 'youre being selfish' But I dont know. I liked how you made her say like that he was happy signing shit and what not. But I dont trust her. Like she said he was happier doing that then he was on their date and I dont believe that. Im hoping that since that this is just in her pov that shes wrong, that shes over reacting and just doesnt see how happy she makes him. But if not then theyre in trouble.
    And I liked the contrast to Mikey's date! that was good.
    And I love how you do those word plays on the names! Liz and Alessa?
    Alesskey! thats funny.

    Author's response

    i know what you mean! you pick up on sooo many things!
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) bindie611 2007-11-11 06:59:52 PM

    awwww sadnesss.. i have no words

    Author's response

    aww not all of it is sad...but i'm glad i made you feel something..
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) MEthePHANTOM 2007-11-12 06:54:08 PM

    i was at the hartford dodge music center the night he sang umbrella best day of my life

    Author's response

    well now you know why he did it. lol. just kidding. i use humor to hide the fact that i'm so fucking jealous that you got to see them live!
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-14 01:03:13 PM

    I loved that chapter, it was really nice on their double date, they were doing like normal things, plus it's good to see mikey get a girl at last! But I agree with everyone else, it was so sad towards the end. But what she did at the end for the fan was so sweet

    Author's response

    i'm glad you liked it...and i'm kinda suprised no one else said nothing about mikey's girl

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