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War Inside My Head
3 reviewsHarry Is reeling from the previous nights revelations; Ron and George set out to confront the culprits; Hermione has a short conversation with her parents.
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Innocence Faded
(#) lycus 2007-11-17
IMPERIO!!! you will continue this story no matter what. you will make sure that molly and ginny are punished for what they did. none of the children will hurt themselves, do you understand...good. Now where were we? oh yes harry and hermione I really don't know where you are going to go with them but personaly i'm going for harry and hermione, but I can't wait to see what happens next.Innocence Faded
(#) Anonymus31 2007-11-17
This story is second on my priority list right now. First is An American Wizard in Hogwarts. Don't worry, Molly and Ginny get their just desserts...not sure if they'll die or not. they may just be forced to live with the knowledge of what they've done. Far more cruel. as for James and Albus, they've got Jonas and Jenna looking out for them.Author's response
FUCK I did it again.
*beats Dobby for no reason*
*Hermione rips author's head off with her bare hands*Innocence Faded
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-11-18
Pretty good update. Harry didn't handle his and Ginny's kids well at all, even considering how fucked up his life just became. Aside from that, I liked everything. Harry/Hermione moments seem inevitable (not that I'm complaining), but what I find myself most looking forward to is justice against Ginny and Molly.
Also a bit weird having Ron and George call her by her first name. Too Kinsfire-ish for me...
Can't wait to read more. Sorry the review count is so low, but such is life on ficwad. It took my stories a while to get a good number as well, and that was back when the site was in great shape.Author's response
that review message was for FFdotNet.
Harry is not handling the news well. I always pegged him as a bit Bipolar, and this news triggered one bitch of a depressive cycle. While I say that Albus looks like he's handling this worse, that's only on the outside. Harry is almost dead on the inside.
I've never actually read any of Kinsfire's work. Not that I can remember, anyway.Innocence Faded
(#) c3markh 2007-11-18
I love the start of the story and I feel that it suits both Molly and Ginnys character traits. Thanks for writingInnocence Faded
(#) DrT 2007-11-18
If it is 'death before dishonor', Ginny should know what to do
"T"Innocence Faded
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-11-18
I agree with T... Ginny should know what to do.Author's response
yes...she should but she won't. If she knew what it was and did it anyway, she's not gonna. I'm thinking some sort of imprisonment. perhaps drug induced catatonia. Just her and her thoughts. *Evil Smirk*Innocence Faded
(#) Cateagle 2007-11-18
I'll agree with the above two, Ginny should know what to do "for the good of the Weasley name and family", though I seriously doubt she'll do something like that. Besides, there's the question of what -that- would do to her kids; I cna think of several ways that could effect them, some good, some bad. One thing I'm sure of, though, I suspect her name is about to become mud in a number of places.
It was indeed a dark day for Molly Weasley and I suspect her bad times are just beginning now that her two youngest sons have lost all respect for her and they'll likely tell their remaining sibs and their father.
I can understand Harry's reactions, I think I'd be tempted along many of the same lines, but I hope he'll think it through as he is strong enough to make it and, really, his kids, -all- of his kids, are going to need his strength as a rock with all the turmoil that'll be going on around them.
I feel, too, for Hermione as just how much she & Harry have been played really comes home to her. I get the feeling she never stopped loving Harry, even after the potion made his behavior so horrible. In that case, this is going to be rough on the kids she had with Ron, too. I suspect Ron, this nicely mature Ron (good job with him, BTW), will be quite understanding and something amicable can be worked out.Innocence Faded
(#) silverleafhp 2007-11-18
Not trying to dis your work here. To each his/her own I say. But for the love of god, could you put a warning in the summary that this fic contains slash?
I have no intrest in reading slash at all, even just the mention of it turns my stomach.
However, I don't hold it aganist anyone who likes that kind of fic, all I ask is that you put something in the summary that warns people like me not to read it. Then you won't have to deal with reviews like this one.Author's response
It's just mentioning that he did it in the PAST not since then, not ever again. Honestly, I don't get it. I'm as homophobic as the next American...and it doesn't bother me. If you don't like even the mention of same sex coupling, read it on FFdot Net. I couldn't think of a good way to phrase it before I posted it there, and i never did put it there afterwards.Innocence Faded
(#) sweetgirl 2007-11-18
I really like this story. Sorry about the low review count, but sometimes if a story is on more than one site sometimes a person might leave a review on one site but not the other. I do that a lot. As far as the story goes I think Harry had a honest reaction to his youngest children. They will be a reminder of that bitch. I know that it will take time for him to get over that but you can't expect it not to happen. I really do hope Hermione challeges the bitch to a honor duel. And pubically kicks her behind all over the wizarding world. I hope they don't let Molly get off for her part. Keep up the great work.
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