(#) No_Leaf_Frantic 2008-08-15That was awesome. I like the fact that Izzy was the more controlling one and not the other way around, which is how most people write them. Great job. Izzy turned out fine, in my humble opinion.
Author's responseThank you...I wrote it in an attempt to make a reviewer from another site happy...she said I write Izzy as too weak, helpless, etc. so I tried writing him differently and this is what came out...
(#) No_Leaf_Frantic 2008-08-16Izzy just strikes me as being the dominate one in the relationship instead of Axl and not just in bed either. Nice work!
Author's responseThank you, and I'm sorry the review reply took forever...I tend to pop in every few months and just kind of reply to any and all new ones. This was actually written because someone on another site complained that my Izzy was too passive, so I tried something new.
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