- Cool updates! Great story. I like the explanation of how Harry ended up with Tony. Keep up the good work. So will Harry add a little more lethality to his suit after this?
Author's response- I think you can count on it. Harry's not going to be too pleased that all his weapons suite could do is anger the beastie...
- You're doing a fantastic job with integrating the two universes. In my opinion you're not overwhelming the reader by trying to add Harry's knowledge of the entire universe all at once. You instead do it in logical steps which is greatly appreciated.
The flashbacks are an excellent method of introducing the events of Harry's past. It gives enough information without becoming too boring.
- This is so very cool, I found myself getting enraptured by the story, irregardless that it's PG-13 or the fact it's a PS-Book story.
I love the fact that you have so many characters and Harry has had a good upbringing after the Dursleys got killed. (which, by the way, THANK GOD)
Plus, I can't wait to see if Dumbledore is going to interfere some more, I reckon it will be cool to see some more people put in their place.
Fun Stuff, Dude. Can't wait for your next update!
Author's response- Thank you.
- I'm currently plotting out 2nd year... Probably have the next chapter out by the first of June.
(#) huntsman345 2008-11-19Cheers madly whilst soiling himself
Fantastic, thank you so much.
I love all of your stories and I was waiting with baited breath for this one to be updated.
I'm so glad and sooo appreciative that you have done so.
A brilliant new chapter to a brilliant story.
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