(#) skylinesXturnstiles 2007-12-20I love this!
Okay, so maybe with the next chapter go back to longer chapters, they have more stuff in them and turn out better.
oh, and this is just a suggestion, but unless you had a really good idea for something to happen before she leaves, maybe jump forward to her arriving.
anyways, i love this!! add to it soon please!!!!
Author's responseoh yeah actually thats a really good idea thanks x
keep reading ! x
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