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Servitude Of Potter
(#) Dragen 2007-12-27
Not a bad start to the story, but I have to say that you could put more paragraphs into the chapter to make it easier to read.
Poor Ron, he daed in taking the Killing Curse for Harry.
Who would have thought that Hermione, Ginny, and Tonks would become slaves.
Could I use ASD, also known as Associative Servitude Disorder. As I think it would work will for my story. PM if it is ok.
I like who Harry has for slaves.Servitude Of Potter
(#) Dragen 2007-12-27
Great start, do you mind if I use ASD, also known as Associative Servitude Disorder idea. PM if I would.Servitude Of Potter
(#) L_Rose 2007-12-27
http://www.ficwad.com/story/27193
"harry's Seraglio"
This story is very, very, scarily similar to that.
I recommend that you switch yours up a bit or risk being accused of plagiarizing
Servitude Of Potter
(#) M16totheface 2008-01-01
Agreed, L Rose. Nice idea, but make up your own way to make it happen.Servitude Of Potter
(#) ToddGilliss 2008-01-07
Interesting start.
Very juvenile.
Hope the next chapters build it up.
Many opportunities ahead.Servitude Of Potter
(#) Mozes 2008-07-25
Interesting opening, I must admit I am curious to see how you work all the talents each girl brings to the table. In fact through the use of the 3 new libraries you could with each of the girls' position actually write a fairly indepth story, either through mysteries they help Harry to solve, magical reform, spell or potion creation etc.
Just an idea.
Mozes
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