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7 ReviewsThis one is dedicated to Kitkatpwl and xSoMeOnEx (AKA the most amazing person ever) because they reviewed the last one! and thats why I updated so soon XD
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I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-12-27 11:01:35 AM
:D I love how you've written this. The minimal dialogue and first person POV really add a lot to the story. You describe things very well and I feel like I know the narrator very well.
The way you write feels really dark and creepy, but I love it. It's awesome! Keep writing :D -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) medicatedlives 2007-12-27 01:48:09 PM
I really like this fic. It's well written and isn't cliche like most of Ryden stories on here. Keep up the good work. =) -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-12-27 02:25:16 PM
this is so awesome!
really, its like the only fic I read without interruption in between. I always change to another site when a paragrapg is over but here, no I read it all.
cant wit for more! -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) jewsicax 2007-12-27 06:43:54 PM
awwwww poor Ryro, you are an excellent writer
intriguing story. -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) xxpatdxx 2007-12-27 06:46:10 PM
The writing is amazing, you detail things very well. Plus I love a Ryden anyday but this one stands out. The character personalitys are awesome, update soon I love it! -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) skylinesXturnstiles 2007-12-27 07:05:32 PM
oh boy.
I LOVE IT!
The writing is awesome! And it leaves you wondering whats going to happen next!
Update soon!!! -
I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan
(#) trueLIEx3 2008-01-03 03:16:41 AM
This is great!
I love it!
More very soon!