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My Brother and His Band
(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-12-28
awww. that was sad. I like it. I like how you took time to describe the small things like pete's coffee.
I could help you edit. if you want. I think I'm fairly good with grammar.Author's response
OMG thank you so much for the review...i really like them...and here is my e mail.
cherrylips223320005@yahoo.com
or
mbarber1982@hotmail.com
and keep reading!!!!
it will only get better....BTW i have 8 other chapters for this story so yeah i am ready to post when ever...My Brother and His Band
(#) fob4ever 2007-12-28
I love the story so far! really, you should keep going. :D keep it up.Author's response
Oh i will and i rly rly like reviews so if you have friends on here that just might so happen to have an account point them in my direction i will post another chapter tomorrow before i go to my dads till tues day...
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