Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'll Be There
Sleep, Just Sleep
3 ReviewsFrank learns of his condidtion.
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I'll Be There
(#) EvolHexx 2008-01-05 09:00:08 AM
zomg.
ZOMMMGGG.
did i already review this?
=S stupid ficwad, it didnt appear,
WELL ANYWAYS.
omg
OMMMMGGG
This is friken awesme
Andd pffftt! YOUR A FRIKEN AWESOME AUTHOR!
This one of the best storys i've read in a long time, no joke.
you totaly rock dude.
keep it up!
ahah anndd giggles updat soon!Author's response
Thanks, Your So supportive! Thanks for your comments on all my Chapter, i really appreciate it! -
I'll Be There
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-01-06 11:57:56 AM
"I can't help but think my story lacks something.... Probably a good author."
Oh gosh, I can't stop laughing. I tend to laugh at things that normal people wouldn't laugh at. But I found that VERY funny!
But seriously--you are a good author. Don't doubt yourself. I like the story, it has a very good plot. You describe the emotions very well. Just one thing I'd watch out on is capitalization; some words are capitalized when they shouldn't be. But that's just a small technical thing, so keep writing!Author's response
Thanks! I'm Glad I made you laugh!
And after reading your comment and reading through my story I realised I realy do tend to capitalize things taht don't need it. Thanks for pointing it out. -
I'll Be There
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-01-08 06:12:23 PM
This is good, and it most definately not lacking a good author!
I found te Mikey almost pissing his pants when Frank fell thing bloody hilarious!
please write more soon!Author's response
Haha, Thanks!
Originally, I Wrote that Bob almost pissed his pants, but i thought it suited Mikey more, he seems the kinda..... i dunno, kinda person who would do that lol.
Thanks for your comment!