Categories > Original > Drama
Heartbroken
4 ReviewsAurora is heartbroken by her boyfriend, and she's debating on getting revenge.
Reviews
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Heartbroken
(#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:33:06 PM
this is realllly good!
you expressed your feeling into the story so easily.
which made the story easy to follow.
i like it alot!
great job!
xx
Marissa.Author's response
thanks marissa :) !
& no, its not a true story..
it just kindof came to me,
i dont even know whyy. :P
but, im glad that someone likes it :) .
at least i know that im going somewhere with my stories :) ! -
Heartbroken
(#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:35:43 PM
this is reallllly good.
you expressed the story with such ease
so it was easy to follow.
i loved it.
but if this is a true story.
i say go to house and slap him across the face
haha
great job!
xx
Marissa -
Heartbroken
(#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:38:26 PM
i loved it.
great work
it was really easy to follow
i like it
:)
but if its a true story
i'd go and slap the guy across the face!
haha
xx
Marissa -
Heartbroken
(#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:38:44 PM
i loved it.
great work
it was really easy to follow
i like it
:)
but if its a true story
i'd go and slap the guy across the face!
haha
xx
Marissa