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Heartbroken

Aurora is heartbroken by her boyfriend, and she's debating on getting revenge.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/01/11 - Updated: 2008/01/11 - 674 words - Complete

Reviews

• Heartbroken

  (#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:33:06 PM

  this is realllly good!
  you expressed your feeling into the story so easily.
  which made the story easy to follow.
  
  i like it alot!
  
  great job!
  
  
  xx
  Marissa.

  Author's response

  thanks marissa :) !
  
  & no, its not a true story..
  it just kindof came to me,
  i dont even know whyy. :P
  
  but, im glad that someone likes it :) .
  
  at least i know that im going somewhere with my stories :) !

• Heartbroken

  (#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:35:43 PM

  this is reallllly good.
  you expressed the story with such ease
  so it was easy to follow.
  
  i loved it.
  
  but if this is a true story.
  i say go to house and slap him across the face
  haha
  
  
  great job!
  
  
  xx
  Marissa

• Heartbroken

  (#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:38:26 PM

  i loved it.
  great work
  it was really easy to follow
  i like it
  :)
  
  but if its a true story
  i'd go and slap the guy across the face!
  haha
  
  
  xx
  Marissa

• Heartbroken

  (#) MarissaBby 2008-01-24 04:38:44 PM

  i loved it.
  great work
  it was really easy to follow
  i like it
  :)
  
  but if its a true story
  i'd go and slap the guy across the face!
  haha
  
  
  xx
  Marissa

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