- laughs I definitely like this story. Well written, amusing, and actually seems like a parody. I don't know how many stories I've read that said they were parodies but well, weren't. (Or the ever so embarassing ones where you think it is a parody but realize the author is actually serious about it after sending the review)
I don't really have any "helpful" comments for you, thought I can honestly say you made me laugh. I look forward to reading more.
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