okay. honestly, Kakashi and sakura? he's like fifteen years older than her! not to mention a total freak. I mean, whio takes their dead friend's eyes?
And what is with This Raiso guy? he's everywhere? and when the hell is this story set, Lyanvis? you keep jumping around so fucking much I can't keep track.
Author's responseKakashi and Sakura was a whim. It sounded good, if felt right, it made sense in the storyline. Raiso is everywhere, because that is how raiso is. He happened to be in konoha on offical buisness that may as well as it may not be covered in another chapter. and like I told novocaine, My Oc's are designed to give a view into another universe. I really knew nothing about the mist, so I made up a whole set of different laws and rules for it. I wanted to know how that system that I had created would interact with the more proper system of the leaf, as well as the new order of the land of sound. This story is just that difference between the lands. Stories need to have a plot, so I have one in here, but life doesn't. and I was trying to convey that a little with this story. when people tell you about themselves, they don't usually go in perfect chonological order, do they? I havent met a single person who does, at least when talking to me. Yes Saphira, that includes you.
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