Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Closet Lovers

Chapter 01

by ficfriction 4 Reviews

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Humor,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2008/01/31 - Updated: 2008/02/03 - 1307 words - Complete

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  • Closet Lovers

    (#) girlinthemoon 2008-01-31 02:26:59 PM

    Yes you should continue with this. I’m very interested in where it will go.
    But then again, you know I love the way you write.

    Author's response

    I was talking about this story with dear Lacon and I came up with an idea for where this MIGHT go. This could be a long story, or a short story, not quite sure yet, but I will try to please ^^.
  • Closet Lovers

    (#) irishgypsy81 2008-01-31 05:02:43 PM

    I have no idea on how or even what to review, because I don't know where you want to go with this. I liked the scene between Andy and Bailey, though. I've read about enough tears and temper tantrums.

    Author's response

    ^^ Yes, I favored that scene as well, and I took care in writing it when I did because I didn't want her to be like other females "YOU'RE A FUCKING FAG?! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!" And all that jazz, but I did want it to be obvious she's upset by it. Thank you still for your review ^^.
  • Closet Lovers

    (#) falloutgirl 2008-02-01 10:44:31 AM

    chants
    Unlock the writers block!

    [Am I the only one who found that amusing? XP]

    In other words, do continue. The storm looks like it's going to stir up some bad weather [Haha. OhGod, I'm getting worse by the sentence] and I really wanna know where you're going to go with the plot! Looks like it's got the makes of a masterpiece.
    =D

    Author's response

    [no, you aren't lol]

    Wow, you might as well be butter, you were on a roll XD.

    I think this good end up being a good story, but there are three questions in my mind. Maybe you could help me out ^^

    1) Will this end up being a long (10 + chaps) story or a short (9 and under) story?

    2) Where the Hell is this story going!? lol

    3) Should she end up with Pete, or Patrick, or no one? Just stay friends with the guys?
  • Closet Lovers

    (#) mooniexmisfit 2008-02-01 02:02:45 PM

    Super interesting, you never really see andy as gay, it's always Pete and Patrick.
    FRO ACTION. ahem, restrains self.

    Author's response

    I decided to switch things up a bit, I know ^^ I just hope this turns out good.

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