(#) girlinthemoon 2008-01-31 02:26:59 PMYes you should continue with this. I’m very interested in where it will go.
But then again, you know I love the way you write.
Author's responseI was talking about this story with dear Lacon and I came up with an idea for where this MIGHT go. This could be a long story, or a short story, not quite sure yet, but I will try to please ^^.
(#) irishgypsy81 2008-01-31 05:02:43 PMI have no idea on how or even what to review, because I don't know where you want to go with this. I liked the scene between Andy and Bailey, though. I've read about enough tears and temper tantrums.
Author's response^^ Yes, I favored that scene as well, and I took care in writing it when I did because I didn't want her to be like other females "YOU'RE A FUCKING FAG?! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!" And all that jazz, but I did want it to be obvious she's upset by it. Thank you still for your review ^^.
(#) falloutgirl 2008-02-01 10:44:31 AMchants
Unlock the writers block!
[Am I the only one who found that amusing? XP]
In other words, do continue. The storm looks like it's going to stir up some bad weather [Haha. OhGod, I'm getting worse by the sentence] and I really wanna know where you're going to go with the plot! Looks like it's got the makes of a masterpiece.
Author's response[no, you aren't lol]
Wow, you might as well be butter, you were on a roll XD.
I think this good end up being a good story, but there are three questions in my mind. Maybe you could help me out ^^
1) Will this end up being a long (10 + chaps) story or a short (9 and under) story?
2) Where the Hell is this story going!? lol
3) Should she end up with Pete, or Patrick, or no one? Just stay friends with the guys?