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Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

'Gerard watches because he likes the way his heart breaks at what he sees.' Past Frank/Gerard pairing.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2008/02/10 - Updated: 2008/02/10 - 1305 words - Complete

Reviews

• Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

  (#) browser18 2008-02-10 06:34:12 AM

  My happy mood is all gone now. :( I love your stories so much even though they break me down every time. You are heart wrenchingly amazing. I don't even know if that's a real word but because your stories exist, it will too. There's no other way I can describe it. You're beautiful. Keep writing. Maybe something that doesn't make me want to die next time? lol A little happy never hurts. Just a thought. :) Great story, Charlie!!

  Author's response

  Haha I have a few kind of happy stories in my 100 MCR onshots =P
  I just can't write happy very well =( It sucks. I wish I could!
  Thank you so much for your comment! They always make me feel so amazing.
  Sorry for stealing your happy mood. If it makes you feel any better I'm doing chemistry coursework right now.. I'm sure you're doing somehting better than that!

• Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

  (#) kitkatpwl 2008-02-10 08:14:35 PM

  wow....loved it, but im not gonna lie, that was not the outcome i expected!!! hahah
  not that it wasnt amazing, because it most certainly was!!! i actually really liked that i didnt expect it! its rare that you cant guess how something is going to end, so congrats!! :)
  and happy is overrated! ;) i liked that it was sad! hahaha
  great job!!
  cheers
  kat

  Author's response

  Hehe I do love plot twists =D
  I'm glad you liked it.
  Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

• Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

  (#) Silvana 2008-02-11 09:58:12 AM

  That's extremely cute and sad, and sweet and yeah, I'm running out of (good) adjectives.
  I really liked it.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! XD

• Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

  (#) TheSharpestLives 2008-02-12 03:28:46 PM

  WooaH!
  I was expecting gerard to like storm throught the club and have Frank right there right then! All kisses nd sweaty boysecs!
  This ending is more bittersweet though, and less random!
  It's great!
  I love it, better than i could come up with!

• Break My Heart From The Dancefloor

  (#) figilio_vampiri 2008-11-08 07:28:52 PM

  Man, this was a really good one-shot! I get tired of reading the whole "I love you and I always have stories" about Gee and Frankie, so this was a nice change and it's good they're both moving on. Great writing!

  Author's response

  Thank you!
  Happy endings bore me too... although I do confess to writing quite a few of them lol
  Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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