- OMG!! That was a kickin' first chapter. Are you taking a page from the Indiana Jones school of scene pacing?
Awesome start, I LOVE the DE's getting so publically spanked, and their sheep getting exposed and judged was great. I feel that the fringe Death Eaters get off too easy in regular cannon/fannon. You are slowly converting my DH to the HP side of the force, as he is a big comic buff. Thanks for the new, looking forward to seeing how this one drives.
(#) jabarber69 2008-02-15Hey I'm afraid I havent read any comic books since the 60's or really early 70's but then again I only remember the characters of the ones I read, is this by any chance the green lantern I dont think so, or maybe dr. strange...no but anyway sounds downright interesting though, definitely gonna be waiting for more... but if it were me, I would of turned all the bleating idiots that were laughing at the muggles and chanting with the de kill the muggles, it would of been fitting if you had turned them into muggles!
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