I've recently discovered my love for writing gruesome horror stories.. This is my first attempt at one, so please enjoy..
(#) mooniexmisfit 2008-02-22 07:56:45 AMI reallllly reallly like this, very new concept. Good Job!
The only sort of constructive critisism I can come up with is when they hit her, they were just sort of, "oh well, no gas and a dead friend. Let's go back to the cabin."
But still, good job!