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the rage and pain within
(#) iamspammer 2008-02-29 09:45:43 AM
I know this story is good BUT the way it's formatted it's very hard to read. If you were to clean it up a bit, it'd be easy to read. -
the rage and pain within
(#) jjracer24 2008-02-29 03:33:22 PM
Yeah the formatting was a bit off but good story, had to work to get there but was still a good story. Hope you update soon.