(#) sleepyfaerie 2008-03-18AAAHHHH
that was amazing
I'm going to have a mini rant, sorry...
she can't be back
Gerard can't leave Frankie
and Kat was so sweet!!!
reminds me of some kind of fangirl
Author's responseThanks ;)
Everything will be explained in the next chapter... hope you like it!
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-03-18Oh my God.
That was so unexpected. Wow...I don't even know what to say.
How is that possible? I'm gonna have a seizure or something.
At the beginning of this chapter, I was in "Awwwwww" mode, but now I'm in, like, "WTF IS GOING ON?!" mode.
Damn, just...write more...soon...
Author's responseI'm glad it was unexpected, the chapter is better that way ;)
And please don't have a seizure, everything will be explained in the next chapter! Lol. I wouldn't want one of my reviewers to bite the dust, now would i? xD
More is on the way, hang in there!
(#) asherschick 2008-03-18Tragic. Tragic with a capital T. But I had this nagging feeling in the back of my head that said Alyssa was gonna jump in the game one way or another after Aileen told her body was never found. She's probably been through hell and back and Gerard's gonna have to look after her... It was obvious he was still in pain because of her loss and now... Everything's fucked up! (The same nagging feeling says that this might be some great conspiracy planned by The Ruins cause you know I'm all suspicious how she managed to get out and could only come home after three months. Or I watch too much government-conspiracy movies :P)
Just, poor poor poor Frankie! He just lost his whole life and now he's gonna lose the one person he cared about the most :'( And of course poor poor Gerard too, he's gonna be so confused...
That last line was so miserable. It sums up the situation perfectly...
And Kat in the beginning was really sweet, I especially loved this: "No! You have to do it now while his lips still taste like yours!"
Anyway, just please let us see that pretty bright light at the end of the dark, dark tunnel.
To sum up, amazing chapter as usual. And right now, I'm listening to The High Court on their MySpace - they sound good :) Something about the vocalist's voice reminds me of Brendon from P!ATD
Author's responseAlyssa will explain herself in the next chapter as best she can. Everything is fucked up for Frankie now, yes, but you know i won't leave him like that forever! hahaha ;)
I'm glad you liked the last line. It took me a while to think it up; i had t find a perfect one to, as you say, sum up his tragedy.
Yay, a new High Court fan ^^ I love the guys voice, he just sings so well. And their songs are amazing, really energetic! I love singing them. Heaven on the Horizon is really sad but really beautiful, look it up on their page (i think its there). I really just like them all hehe. If you know of any good groups you think i may not know of, tell me about them! We seem to have similar tastes in music, and i love listening to new bands xD
Thanks for reviewing < 33333333333
(#) shyflyhigh 2008-03-19okay it was all good in the beginning i was saying pond it to my computer from what Kat was saying to Frank then all of sudden she comes back after 3 months that tottally threw me off and then i felt sad for Frankie seens he just lost the one he cared about most but...it was still good more soon plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!
Author's responseGlad you liked it... even though you're confused now. You'll understand soon ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
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