Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > I've Got Headaches And Bad Luck But They Couldn't Touch You
(#) falloutbaby89 2008-03-20I'm going through the same thing with two of my stories but the one I just started now is controlling my fingers faster than my mind. I think you should make her vision a bit blurry but not to the point she's completely blind. I think it'd be sort of cliche if there was a strain in the relationship and they seem to love each other too much. Otherwise I'm loving both stories.
(#) guiltypleasurexxo 2008-03-20i agree with falloutbaby89 go with the vision choice but dont make her completely blind again
- i agree also. mess with her vision alittle, but not to hardcore. i love it so far. keep up the great work.
(#) mooniexmisfit 2008-03-20I agree with everyone, but who are we to decide I guess? And I looove 'I want to be known for my hits not just my misses' fo real. A wedding is going to be lovely!!! Like, a lot of times you don't want to get sequels like these cliche but it sort of happens anyways; like my A Stitch Away, it sort of went down the shitter but it's cute to write, so hooray?
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