(#) toynbeeluver 2008-04-01Dude. that was wicked awsome to teh max. i couldnt think of any other way to describe it. i hope you update soon cause i sooooooo want to know that secret and i want to see Jack kick some butt soon so i hope that comes up. great fight scene by teh way. those are mega hard to write so good on ya mate.
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