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chapter 3

by xxsapphireravenxx 3 Reviews

Battle for the Bridge.

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Naruto - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2008/04/07 - Updated: 2008/04/08 - 3172 words

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  • Soul Slayer

    (#) Vilkath 2008-04-07 09:44:45 PM

    Always good to see an update, even if this isn't the best of chapters. I am glad the author had the courage to change the wave events some, unlike so many other stories that are afraid to even change the dialog. On the other hand most of what happend wasn't all that major and the changes were mostly cosmetic in the long run.

    Still it is nice to see a smarter Naruto for a change, so many 'smart naruto' fics have him be arrogant as well which counter acts most of the brains he might of had. So many stories have naruto charge into the dome of ice mirrors either out of ignorance or arrogance. This is one the few that actualy had him plan something decent and logical out.
  • Soul Slayer

    (#) Saric 2008-04-18 01:15:51 PM

    really good story, like how you gave naruto a bow-like bloodline. i think that's very creative since i have yet to see one where he has that kind of bloodline.
  • Soul Slayer

    (#) Rinnbaku 2008-05-13 02:12:44 PM

    I like the "Uryu" element (imagine, fifty Narutos lined up in formation, blasting away with chakra-ya; devastating)... I don't like how Naruto had an overnight maturation. That kind of thing doesn't really happen, even in anime...

    BTW, there's another way to say "shoot to kill", which I'm assuming you got from Bleach. Ichimaru Gin's shikai uses this phrase: "Ikorose". I just thought you might like to know... I think that it's a little less of a mouthful, if you get my meaning.

    This is really original, especially in the way that Naruto handles situations. Most people would have him charging into Haku's Mirror Jutsu, but you have him pulling Sasuke out from below, which (now that I think about it), is absolutely genius. A design flaw that Haku completely missed, apparently. Too used to fighting on solid earth... Brings up the question about what he would do against a Tsuchi-nin that burrows...

    Anyway, keep up the updates!

    TTFN
    Rinn ^_^

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