(#) aly_ajxxiero 2008-04-08
"I felt a sort of d"
WHY DOES IT STOP THERE?!?! :(( I'm sad now... I can't tell what really is happening:) I'm thrilled and sad at the same time:))
P.S. I'm in love with your story! :))
Author's responseThanks for letting me know about this.
It got cut off cuz Ficwad HATES me, and never lets me put up words with accents. It was supposed to say "déjà vu" but it won't let me put that, so i had to change it a bit... hope it works now! :)
Thank you!! < 333
- OMFG!!! This chapter is REALLY FANTASTIC!
While Gerard told Frank that he loves him, I was like "AWWWWWWWWW!" and then "Whaooo!" And when Kat got in but couldnt see them, my jaw dropped. I really really love it!
Im so in love with this story. Your so talented! CANT wait till 24th! going to rate
Author's responseWow, thanks!
Hahaha glad it caused you... to do all that, that is def good xD
Thank you so much ;)
(#) aly_ajxxiero 2008-04-08Still Inlove! haha, I promised to review again! :) I'm evil... I can't beleve a twelve year old girl would end up engaged and become evil:)) LOL, kidding! 5 Stars for you!
Author's responseYay for another review! xD
Yes, you are evil, but you'll be more so later on haha
Thankies < 333
(#) asherschick 2008-04-08+1 Hot for you and for the beautiful romance you write. Only 2 to go before the chapter turns green =)
YES YES YES hahaa! Gerard has seen the right way at last :P I'm glad you wrote this like you did, otherwise Frankie really would have seemed like the second option... Heheee, but noo! He's the one and only for Gee!
I especially loved the part where Frank placed Gerard at the other side of the room and ran away from him to talk. Hehe, that was really sweet, I smiled all the way along... And Gee going invisible slowly, telling him that Frank makes him feel that way. It must be so hard to be avoided by the very person you need attention from. It was sad, but kinda romantic, too.
Also, I adore Kat right now, really. She is the greatest xD
And I love the song, though I love all MCR songs, but Prison kinda has its own little world in my head & heart. And you're right, the lyrics fit so right in this chapter!!
So, yeah, good luck with your exams, we can wait for the next update. But school won't wait so... And can I wish myself some luck for my exams, too? =P
Author's responseYaaay the chapter is green! My wish came true... hahaha ;)
I'm glad you understand why i wrote it that way... no way in hell is Frankie gonna be second in line! haha
Yeah, i liked writing that part, Frank being all nervous and pushing Gee around xD
Kat is my fav girl character in this story hehe
Thanks! Good luck to you too! hehe
(#) MCR_dynamite 2008-04-08Aw, that was cute! ^_^ I love the way you write, about Frankie keeping the distance in the room, that made me laugh.
The way you wrote it made it realistic, too.
I loved this chapter! :)
Urgh, exams. Don't remind me. Mine are coming up, I need to study and revise!!! But instead, I think I'll just read and write fanfic instead :P
Author's responseYes, i thought that was cute too ^^
hahaha fanfic is much better than anything school wise. Good luck with yours!
(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-04-08picks jaw up off floor ... re - attaches said jaw WOOOAH! OMG!! That was just so damn brilliant! Seriously, I was smiling so much through that, and then frank made gee stand on the other side of the room and i just had to laugh it was so cuuute! Then just, woah, for the rest of it my jaw just dropped I was like - omg omg omg! woooow! This was such amazing chapter, well doone! And the lyrics matched perfectly :]
Good luck with your exams, Im lucky cos I've already finished mine, I bet you'll do great in them.
Eagerly awaiting the next update, and now Im off to go and rate. (Woot, that rhymed. Im a poet and I didnt know it) xD
luv rayray xox
Author's responsehahaha Thanks so much! ^^ Glad you enjoyed it as much as i did writing it xD
Thanks, i'll need it haha Hope yours went well!
Thankies for the rating xD
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-04-08Bnm?]sn!@#$%nm,dsnjmc.sa].nferfjkw2!!!nm.d7892jclAZHJFD#2m,wsWed#E?Derfjwhk,lSd\k!
He's invisible c:
Omg! Ahah 'Fuck Frank? Sounds like a good plan' OMG! That was fucking Amazing!!!
Author's responseYou review made me laugh xD
haha Yes, we all know fucking Frank is a good idea... wait, did i just say that out loud? :p
Thanks for the reviewwww
(#) shyflyhigh 2008-04-08fucken finally!!!
the bitch is getin kick to the curb YEAH!!!!!!:)
i would love to be invisable i wont get in so much trouble:)
Author's responseYeaaaah xD
Haha yeah, it would be an awesome power to have. You could do really cool things with it hehe
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