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Chapter Nine: Return of the Phoenix

by SoccerDevil22 1 Reviews

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2008/04/10 - Updated: 2008/04/10 - 3776 words

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  • Harry Potter and the Chronicles of Time: Part II

    (#) melferd 2008-04-15 03:30:28 PM

    Your story is intriguing and different. However;
    you are affected by others, you both cause and effect others. Please, get some grammar help, beat your beta about the head and shoulders with a copy of the Little, Brown handbook.
    It distracts from an otherwise delightful tale.

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