Things get slightly awkward, and then boredom sets in.
- wow! you are a fantastic writer. everything is so detailed. i really liked how egan described being trapped in the house. i think it would be really interesting if bob, frank, mikey, and ray were introduced in the story soon. keep it up!
Author's responseThank you so much! Thats good to know, I was afraid I was doing this thing I do where I get too caught up in the details and the reader is just sitting there like "Come on dude, pick up the pace. Make somebody have sex or pop a pill, give me somethin'...". I hate when I do that. Egan is a reflection of me in many ways (I know, how ickily cliche is that?) so when I am bored or flirty or what have you, so is she. She has a very mercurial mood, it shifts often and very quickly. So, I have been getting bored with my surroundings lately and so has she. And I have plans for the rest of the band to make appearances later on. I also think I'm going to tell things from Gerard's POV some more. I definitely have things planned for waaaaay down the line. Babies? Drug addictions? Communistic regimes? I'll leave you to guess. Once again, I wrote too much.
(#) funnychick 2008-04-11 11:27:55 PM0.0 Wow. You are a beautiful writer! And I love your writing technique! This story is defiantly one of my favourites that I have ever read. Please update soon, and keep up on this fantastic story! =]
Author's responseOh, that is such a compliment! I will, I promise. I have done a chapter a day so far, but it's getting harder. I am trying, I just ask you all not get made if it turns to less than once a day. Thanks so much!