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Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
The paranoia of a group of magic users led them to create a living book containing all their knowledge which grows with time. A neglected Harry Potter stumbles across it and his life changes
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Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) rolalinii 2009-07-26
i'm going to have to agree and disagree with everyone about your story. the premise is great, i love the storyline no questions about that. the writing though, it was good for about the first 3-4 chapters but after that it started droning on. the characters really have no feeling to them. its like if they're robots or something and while you explain things that are being done its too much explaining and not enough story imo. don't get me wrong i enjoy the story but i'd say this is a bit lackluster.Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) walar 2009-11-28
I've been reading this story over the last week or so, and I've enjoyed it immensely. Now I'm at chapter 17, but it seems to have gone missing :-(Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) naraic 2009-12-02
Walar chapter 17 works ok for me, well its annoying as the drop down box shows the wrong chapter title, try AFF if you have problems here
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(#) PfiberOptik 2010-04-15
I have been reading and so far this is a very hot story.
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(#) jafo2008 2010-07-11
great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens over the summer.Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) kris88 2010-09-02
...story is acceptable and innovative , BUT i imagine prof. Binns ;-) lessons like this (it may be interesting but the way its written is rather boring) i dont read it anymore... (but still a respectable story)Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) Ensoa 2010-10-24
Great!
It's nice to know you didn't forget the Greengrass pair, I'm a fan of Daphne and Astoria doesn't get enough attention.
I really love this fic, but it would be nice if the plot advanced a bit faster.
And I hope Harry doesn't share and is possesive of his vassals!
Can't wait for next chapter!
~E!Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) Damon8811 2011-02-27
I have been a follower of this story since the first chapter and I have to agree with a few other reviewers you have slowed the plot with to much sex. I am also afraid you are getting to be to wordy in your explanations.Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) cloudfw 2011-03-04
Very, very good story. Interesting characters and a lot of plot. Good smut also in later chapters which is not always the case in longer stories.
Thank you very much for your great work.Harry and KiKi: Tales of the Boy Necromancer
(#) PaddyBoy 2011-03-22
Another excellent chapter. I am looking forward too Harry's second year and maybe his domination of Hermione's mother and her girlfriend. Glad that Fluer is to be his new maid as that will add interest for other avenues the story can travel. Update soon.
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