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Year 1 Part 5

Since when do shopping trips have an aftermath? Since now, apparently.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione,Mandy Brocklehurst,Sibyll Trelawney - Warnings: [!!] [X] [?] [Y] - Published: 2008/04/14 - Updated: 2008/04/15 - 2371 words

Reviews

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) xxsapphireravenxx 2008-04-15 03:04:34 AM

  you made a slight error with tonks. when you introduced her she was a gryffindor 7th year prefect with a red and gold badge thing, and during the meeting with sprout she was a hufflepuff..i don't think iread that wrong. good story otherwise, but the little things matter too, especially if they're not consistent.

  Author's response

  Damn, I thought I'd fixed that one...
  
  I try to stay consistent. Part 4 of Year 1 has been fixed. I hope.

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-04-15 11:27:11 AM

  Very good chapter. Love it when Harry has good times.
  
  gunny

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) David3560 2008-10-22 01:17:02 PM

  IM sorry author but this story is not doing anything for me there is just way to many questions that are not answered The story just dosnt flow as it was. its boring that's all there is to it.

• The Accidental Harem

  (#) Basilisk1 2011-04-17 11:28:51 AM

  Not a bad job with this chap.

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