- Your story is a little off the wall, isn't it? First no info on how 5th house [ harem ] came to be, Hogwarts is in ruins... yet school goes on as normal. Magical Government taken over by Bolivia, yet Bones is the new minister? Sounds like a long twilight zone story from the 60's. Overall its a good story , just some really important gaps missing.
- Heroic Ending:
Much better, but I never like letting the evil dude lie around--sooner or later he will escape.
This also get Bumblemore taken care but it misses Snape.
dp3062: there are multiple endings, not a single ending for the first year. If confused, read the A/N.
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