This was the most fun chapter yet.
- gerard and egan's argument was hysterical to read. it reminds me of how i talk with my friends. the dialouge is really natural. i cant wait for her to meet the family. i think this was your best chapter yet!
p.s. i totally didnt get the tattoo conversation. explain. (please)
Author's responseThanks you. I agree, I think it was my best chapter yet as well. I was typing the argument so fast I kept making mistakes and I would have to correct them and it was pissing me off, but the argument thing was very fun to write.
As for the tattoos, Frankie's got the mind of a perv. Ever heard of a thing called the 69 position? Look it up ;]
(#) darkviolet 2008-04-17 03:34:46 AMlol well 69 is um...lol...I dunno, I'm giggling too hard to explain and am I supposed to anyway? It's ficwad...Corrupting the youngsters tsk tsk I don't think you can do it unless you reached 15 chapters...Nah I'm just kidding, there's no such rule, you can corrupt them anytime you'd like...Yeah that didn't come out right.
As for Frank and Egan...um I don't think so, good friends- totally, a couple- nope. I think Gerard and her are more right together, they know what the other thinks and was I wrong to detect a bit of a jealous spark in Gee dearest when Frank and Egan were playing who's on top game in the kitchen? Yes? No? My Gerard obsessed mind?...Could be..
Author's responseI dunno...;] I can't reveal yet. Maaaaaybe Gerard was jealous. Maaaaaybe you've just lost your mind. I just can't say...