I feel summarizing often ruins the effectiveness of the story. That's why I say weird, cryptic, brief stuff in my summaries.
- The lullaby was so pretty. Do you speak Italian?
The nurse's comment about the domestic abuse hotline was a much needed moment of hilarity in a strained and sad chapter.
In the next chapter I'm having this fantasy of Frank bursting into the hospital room with ballons and a card that says, "Congratulations, It's a boy!" or something of that nature.
I loved it as I always do.
Author's responseI agree. And no, tragically, I do not. I have a strong desire to learn though.
Yes, the nurse provided some comic relief. It was getting to be too much for me.
I'm thinking it's possible I may use that. That's freakin' hilarious.
Thank you. A good, helpful review, as always.
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-04-25 05:23:01 AMoh wow!
i have just read this story from start to finish. i have sat here and ignored all the other many things i should have been doing today and read your words.
this is a lovely story and you write so beautifully. this is different from anything else i have read.
thank you so much, now i cannot wait for more!
Author's responseThank you! I love being told I'm good at something, I love new readers, and I love reviews, so you just gave me, like, three presents.
(#) icyblue858 2008-04-25 06:48:25 PMI just read it up until now and it ADORE THIS STORY! I can't wait for another update! I can't wait to see what happeneds now that she has woken! Hope you update soon because I am on the very edge of my seat!
Author's responseMy, my but you are slightly manic :] It makes me happy. Don't fall off your seat and hurt yourself though hun.