(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-04-27 04:25:11 AMthis was a fun chapter! i like that donna and mikey are in the story now!
“I’m just playing, mama. Breathe.” in relation to gerard marrying Egan!!
Aw, come on!” Frank cried, chasing him. “Gerard does it!” this made me smile re the fact that gerard and frankie kiss on stage!!
great update thanks!!
Author's responseYeah, they were in desperate need of new characters I think. More appearances coming soon!
That's one of my faves too, about Gerard doing it. I'm kind of proud of it.
- hahahahahahahah! this was by far the funniest chapter yet! as for favorite lines... would you like me to just rewrite the entire chapter for you?
hmmmm... the conversation with gerard and egan about their nails then ending with the suicide hotline comment was unbelieveably funny, the whole mikey and frank acrobatic show in the hospital room put me in hysterics, and my personal favorite was gerard announcing he was going to marry egan. just throws another complication into their already confusing relationship. thanks for that, now im even more confused.
that chapter was as close to perfect as i think you can get, but i do have one problem.
"stuff happens"?!?!? are you serious? if you are going to be that vague you might as well not put anything at all!
Author's responseHaha, yeah, I don't really believe in summaries. I think they give away what's going to happen in the chapter before it happens. Which sucks.
Egan and Gerard are real smart asses sometimes. It's why I love them. They're very good at duet comedy, in my opinion.
I like your reviews best, I think. You're very insightful, and you say good stuff and ask good questions.
(#) linerlover 2008-04-27 01:34:32 PMoh man i love this chapter so much.
favourite lines??? why do you have to make me choose. i say the entire chapter. although the acrobatic routine was particularly amazing. and i bet it would be immensely fun in real life.
and i liked donna telling the adults off. that made me laugh.
and damn, this whole thing is confusing. the relationships between all the characters especially.
Author's responseWhy thank you! I like to think having Frank Iero chase me around a room would be awfully fun.
I'm getting alot of that. I didn't mean for it to have a confusing vibe, it makes perfect sense to me, but I'm writing it, so it would, I suppose. Um, I think I'm gonna put an A/N about that in the next chapter, because people are taking some things the wrong way, and that's no good.