(#) Random_Guy 2008-04-24From what I've read thus far this could become either very good, or really poor.
I hope it is the former, and look forward to finding out which it turns out to be.
I just hope this does not become one of those stories where just because Harry is an elf the whole wizarding world falls on their knees before him in awe.
Author's responseIf it goes like I plan they will need to hide what they are from the humans except for Hermione's parents.. At least the British humans in this world the UK MoM is the most bigoted out side of maybe some of the traditional Arabic or African ones.. And that is up for debate.
This is less a super Harry and more a Bond and Creature story.
- Very interesting and different, a delightful new take that I look forward to it's unfolding.
I hate to nag, but to condense something is to reduce it. To condescend is to look down upon.
If you bare something, you expose it to others.To bear something is to carry it.
Sorry to niggle at an otherwise fresh and delightful story!
(#) Trini_Randy 2008-04-24Interesting...I agree with Random Guy. Also I hope this is not a super!Harry fic. Does this mean that you are not going to update The Black Phoenix now. Other than that good start, I look forward to the future chapters, and what happened from before the letter, during Diagon Trip, is everything the same as canon?
Author's responseDepends on what you mean by Super Harry. I am not sure he is Super, but Magic reacts to him and Hermione after the bonding differently then to Human Wizards
(#) jabarber69 2008-04-24Hey outstanding story! I love harry as an elf and love his ship with hermione and now her to being an elf and his bonded, whoohooo!
P.S. Your a great writer but you have this tendency to not to finish your work, so please, please do us a great big favor and actually finish this and hopefully in a timely manner, like you know this year maybe!
Author's responseI will try. :D Its partly my muse and partly just my brain jumping plot bunnies
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